Shadows sunk over the City. The sky turned dark. No lights showed from below. The planes hummed over and through clouds in single file. A man spoke into Jakes intercom, "Planes one mile from target. ready for bombing?" unease passed though Jake for the first time,"Uh...yes, Gerald," he tried to swallow his increasing nervousness. Was this the right thing to do? No, no he comforted himself, it has to work. It HAS to.
This is a piece of a story idea! would someone like to add on to this? this could be the ending. the middle or the beginning. if you are willing write a back-story about the character and what lead up to this. then how he over comes the problem....what ever that is it can be short or long. SO, tell me. comment!(you can make it whatever time period you want too!) PLZ COMMENT!
Did you like the idea I gave you yesterday?
ReplyDeleteyou are supposed to post the story on the blog! yes i do love it!
ReplyDeletealso it has to be a time period that has PLANES in it... like you can't do the Civil War.
ReplyDeleteOh.... World War 1?
ReplyDeletewhat ever you want! just start writing it.:)
ReplyDeleteWhat? I write it? I thought you were going to.
ReplyDeleteknow it was for any one to write...we could write it together! you start since you had the Idea and ill add on:)
ReplyDeleteBTW the time period could be fictional as well....like it doesn't have to be historical fiction it could just be fiction!
ReplyDeleteOkay, give me time to think about what to write okay?
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